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Professor Lin Sequoia by HourglassHero Professor Lin Sequoia by HourglassHero
I updated it earlier than expected...

GIGANTIC credit to ~afo2006 for the lineart and overall improvement. :D



Hope you like her!

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Critique by SirMarshall Feb 17, 2012, 8:21:20 PM
I love it!
Is she the Starter/Oficial Prof. of Dhiome? (I love it again! I want see only, Only a preview of Carl Asphobel!)
*I would like see her at a more good standing!

* Hair should be at least ... * Something exotic, innovative and stunning!

* The clip of her hair a little more should call the attention of his audience, Baby!

* I like her pants! I think you should simplify it more ... * A current fashion. (I recommend the fashion of pants that are used in Korea!)

* The boots should give a touch of seriousness, authority, rudeness, and last but not least, the style of clothing worn today in the vague world of fashion!

* Positive: The T-shirt I love it! (I had a character with the same model, will have to change ...). His coat is excellent. I like the seam you use in your neck. His belt is enviable, I love it (I have one like it in my closet). Her enciclopedia is good! The technique of her eyes is Original!

* Requests or Ideas: I would like that she was more tanned. she's working Biology (SUN!).

already, thanks for read my "Stupid" Critique.
Do not feel bad. I'm still loving and caring you! I want you to be the best all others. I will always be for you when you need me.
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Thought I'd right a critique; as I watched you produce the work :D

Vision: It's definitely one of my favourite pieces out of your gallery; it's shows a different aspect to Pokemon Professors, which you never usually see.. The pose is unique, and gives the character a certain flair; which has been lacking both in Pokemon and fan-games..
The colour scheme is very warming; which gives you an idea of the kind of person she is, being constantly outside - she would appear to be a darker colour.. The book is a really nice touch, and makes the Professor stand out more.. However maybe a lighter hair colour would of been more suitable; I just think that the green is too saturated...

Originality:
The originality of the piece, can be debated somewhat; even though it was drawn completely by yourself; the idea of Pokemon was still used. Furthermore the idea of a Female Professor has been overused since the release of Pokemon B/W and Professor Juniper; however her description makes her sound more of a masculine and dominant character; as well as her physique being less slender then the Pokemon Professors; and female characters that we are used to seeing..

The shading style seems similar to Sugimori's Shading style but with a few alterations; which makes the image stand out even more; making this piece, worthwhile to study.

Technique:
Can't really say much on your technique as it's superb; the shading has been well executed and the characters pose is dynamic and original.
The lines have also been drawn by both a Tablet and the Pen tool; which combined together has made your lineart clean and also neat.

Impact:
This piece has a hefty impact on the viewer; due to it capturing there attention quite quickly. It stands out from the rest of the work in your gallery; and in my opinion is the best piece you've done so far..

Overall:
A brilliant piece Hourglass Hero :D Keep it up :D
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MooMinded Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2013
wow, she looks very sporty and out going o.o very cool!
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MegaRezfan Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I can tell she's physical :)
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:iconkenliano:
Kenliano Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Gasp! Our Professor persons have the same surname! And they're both girls! No matter, though, they look very different. Heh. I like Lin, she looks really fun! A Jeff Corwin-Professor!
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HourglassHero Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
[link] ^^

thanks!
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:iconkenliano:
Kenliano Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hehe, yeah, I wonder if I'll change the name now... Nah; I'll keep it. It's too awesome a name. :)
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:iconkopycat101:
kopycat101 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student General Artist
Woah! I like her new revamp design!
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:iconafo2006:
afo2006 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
8) She looks totally awesome *-*


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:iconhourglasshero:
HourglassHero Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
well mister what did u expect? :P
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:iconafo2006:
afo2006 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
XD ;)
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:iconpen911:
Pen911 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
Yay! you stuck with the theme of "Tree" Surnames ^_^
Great work as always! :D
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:iconmidnitez-remix:
Midnitez-REMIX Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Nice job, only problem is the knees which are to low.
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:iconhourglasshero:
HourglassHero Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
fixed! :)
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:iconmidnitez-remix:
Midnitez-REMIX Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Maybe a touch higher.
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:iconcrisfarias:
CrisFarias Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing, really pokemonish !!! i love
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:iconmisterreno:
MisterReno Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
She cannot be as hot as my boobies.
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:iconhourglasshero:
HourglassHero Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ur boobies are godlike! :P
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:iconmisterreno:
MisterReno Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
yumyumyumyum. Also, I liek her xD sorry I'm blinded by my boobies.
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DrawnArtist Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
If she doesn't have a name, could it be Cedar?
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:iconhourglasshero:
HourglassHero Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i think the one i use sounds a bit better! :)
but thanks for the suggestion! :D
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:iconcrisfarias:
CrisFarias Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I want see your Human improvement so badly Hari >.< , please post it most fast you can o3o
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:iconpen911:
Pen911 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Hey, what's her surname ? :) because every pokemon professor's surname is the name of a tree :P or have you just gone for a more traditional name ?
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:iconhourglasshero:
HourglassHero Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's going to be mentioned when revealed... so stay tuned!
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:iconpen911:
Pen911 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
oh lol okay ^_^
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:icondaybreakm:
DaybreakM Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Just the shadow? I wanna see her full art :(
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:icondirorodono:
dirorodono Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Sorry i just realized how to do a critique. HE HE HE. My fault.
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Narusaku4ever14 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013
wondering... O.o
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:icondrelldm:
drelldm Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOVE the Carolus Linnaeus reference :D very clever!
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:iconar-tantris:
ar-Tantris Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
are there pics of Carl uploaded... or has he not been drawn yet?
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:iconhourglasshero:
HourglassHero Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i haven't drawn him yet!
but u won't have to wait for long! :)
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:iconar-tantris:
ar-Tantris Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012
cool! can't wait! :)
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:iconsuperdan2110:
SuperDan2110 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
Let's see, what did you update this time. Oh, it's the badge card thing, right?
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:iconhourglasshero:
HourglassHero Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
it is mentioned in the description! :P
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SuperDan2110 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012
Oh sorry, I do normally read descriptions, honest.=D
Please please please, what do you think of [link]
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ScoIipedes Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The shading looks so warm! Good Job!
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:iconhourglasshero:
HourglassHero Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks! :)
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:iconsnappy-k:
Snappy-K Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice design but pokeballs arent that small when they are shrunk. more like the size of a plum
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:iconhourglasshero:
HourglassHero Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
"Poké Balls are not always at full size. Pressing the button on the front will convert it between its full size, about the size of a baseball, to a smaller size, about that of a ping-pong ball, and back again. The larger size makes throwing the ball easier, while the smaller one makes for easier storage on a belt clip, in pockets, and in bags."

i don't think it is small! :P
thanks about the feedback!
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Snappy-K Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i know that they go smaller "Nice design but pokeballs arent that small when they are shrunk" is what i said. but its still too small for a ping pong ball. maybe its her hands that make it look small
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:iconhourglasshero:
HourglassHero Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Snappy-K Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i still abide by my reply
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zephleit Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice work on this one.
She looks a bit of a tomboy, but it does suit her.
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:iconhourglasshero:
HourglassHero Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
she is tomboyish indeed! :)
thanks zeph!
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:iconmidnitez-remix:
Midnitez-REMIX Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
If it wasn't for her chest I would've never known it was a she.
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:iconhourglasshero:
HourglassHero Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
um she looks like female to me! XD
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:iconmidnitez-remix:
Midnitez-REMIX Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I think it's because I can barely see her lashes and her body type looks a bit more masculine (besides the boobs).
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:iconcrisfarias:
CrisFarias Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great Work, have some things you can be fix and get better, because i know you can do C: , like the sharp chin, and the hair movement, just that, and i love the hair effect, the shadow from the bang ^^
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:iconhourglasshero:
HourglassHero Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
fixed the chin! :)
and thanks about the hair shadow! :P
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RayquazaMaster Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Great name choice! :D I believe Linnae is also part of the scientific name for the provincial flower of Småland!
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:iconhourglasshero:
HourglassHero Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yup! ^^
The Twinflower! :3
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:iconrayquazamaster:
RayquazaMaster Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yes, that's it! :D
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